The air erupted. Cannon fire from the cutters rained down, striking sparks off the canyon walls, forcing Altyn and the dockhands to scramble behind rocks and wreckage.
Zara, with a roar of defiance from the Icarus's patched-up engine, lifted off, weaving through the initial barrage with breathtaking skill, drawing the cutters' attention. The dockhands returned fire with their assorted rifles and a single, salvaged, jury-rigged aetherium harpoon gun that spat crackling energy bolts.
It was gnats challenging dragons.
Altyn, heart pounding, watched the Icarus dance, Zara pushing the abused machine past every conceivable limit. She had to get to Thorne’s ship. It was the only way Zara's sacrifice, Chance's gamble, and her father's silenced voice, would mean anything.
As the Seraph's Fury descended slowly, arrogantly, towards the airstrip, its main cannons tracking the evasive Icarus, Chance made his move. A magnetic grapple shot from his perch, clamping onto the underside of Thorne's behemoth. With a wild yell, he swung across the abyss, landing precariously on a maintenance catwalk.
Altyn watched, breath held, as Chance became a whirlwind of desperate action. He dodged guards, sabotaged external sensor arrays with practiced ease gained from years of skirting regulations, fighting his way towards the ship's vulnerable underbelly access panels. He was movement, chaos, a single spark against overwhelming force.
But Thorne, ever meticulous, anticipated internal threats. An armored hatch slammed down, and focused energy bursts lanced through the air. Altyn saw Chance stagger, clutch at his chest where a scorch mark bloomed dark and final, and then fall, vanishing into the shadows beneath the vast ship.
“CHANCE!” Altyn’s scream was raw grief, swallowed by the roar of engines and weapons fire. He hadn't just been a rogue; he'd been a friend, and now, another victim of Thorne's world, and he'd died buying her this chance.
Thorne's amplified voice boomed across the canyon, dripping with condescending dismissal. “You should have stayed out of this race, Altyn. You see what happens when you meddle? Your friends die. This world belongs to those strong enough to control its power, not those who whine from the gutters.”
Grief ignited into incandescent rage.
Altyn saw Zara, impossibly, still evading the cutters, the Icarus trailing smoke and shedding parts.
She saw the dockhands pinned down, fighting a hopeless battle.
She saw Chance's fall.
Thorne’s smug pronouncements weren't just about her; they were about crushing any hope for a different Valoria. The datalogs. Justice. Or vengeance. Perhaps, in this moment, they were the same.
The Final Strike
There was no calculation left. Only instinct, grief, and a blinding certainty. Altyn sprinted towards the hidden alcove where her father had kept his emergency stash – including a prototype directional aetheric resonator, unstable but potent. It was designed to disrupt concentrated aetherium fields, but with a little creativity it could also be a weapon.
Ignoring the dockhands' shouts, she calibrated it with trembling fingers, aiming it not at the Seraph’s Fury’s hull, but at its core engine signature, pouring her own desperate energy into the device’s activation matrix.
It was a one-shot weapon, as likely to overload as it was to work.
She triggered it.
A silent pulse, visible only as a shimmer distorting the air, lanced towards the descending flagship.
For a heart-stopping moment, nothing happened.
Then, the smooth flight of the Seraph’s Fury faltered. Warning lights flashed across its obsidian surface. Internal explosions rocked the massive ship as its finely tuned aetherium core struggled against the forced resonance cascade. Control surfaces failed. The behemoth listed, smoke pouring from its engine nacelles.
Zara seized the opportunity. With a final, desperate maneuver, she rammed the failing Icarus into one of the Seraph’s Fury’s damaged auxiliary engines. The impact was catastrophic.
Altyn saw Thorne’s face on a flickering external view screen – arrogance melting into disbelief, then fury, then perhaps, fleetingly, fear.
It wasn't the triumph she'd imagined. It was just… an ending.
The explosion was a physical force, a blinding white erasure of sound and sight that threw Altyn back against the canyon wall. Fire and metal rained down in a apocalyptic ballet.
The Golden Icarus, Zara's chariot of defiance, disintegrated.
The Seraph's Fury began its long, uncontrolled plummet.
The wreckage burned for hours, casting flickering, hellish light onto the canyon walls. The Seraph’s Fury lay broken, a testament to the fragility of power. The Golden Icarus was scattered embers, swallowed by the destruction it had wrought.
In the ringing silence that followed, broken only by the crackle of flames and the distant, panicked calls from the surviving cutter crews, Altyn felt utterly empty. She had struck back.
But the cost…
Altyn, bruised and battered, was pulled from the edge of the inferno by the surviving dockhands. Zara was gone, consumed in her final act of defiance. Chance was gone, his sacrifice securing the chaos needed for the final blow.
But amidst the twisted metal of Thorne's command deck, miraculously shielded by a collapsed bulkhead, they found it: the Prefect’s personal datalog, intact.
As Thorne lay dying in the wreckage, pinned beneath a girder, his eyes found Padilla's. No remorse. Only cold, chilling conviction.
“You think this changes anything?” he rasped, a bloody froth on his lips. “You’ve merely opened the door for worse vultures. This city… this world… needs a firm hand. You’ve unleashed chaos, girl. You’ll drown in it.”
Altyn offered no reply.
His words echoed the fear gnawing at her. Exposing Thorne’s corruption – the rigged contracts, the suppressed safety reports, the exploitation masked as progress – wouldn't magically heal Valoria. It might simply create a power vacuum.
The datalogs were transmitted anonymously, beamed via salvaged equipment to every news outlet, every public Vid-screen in Cadenza, before the Guild enforcement ships finally arrived, drawn by the calamity.
They didn't flee.
Standing amidst the wreckage, the datalog secured, Altyn and the remaining loyalists surrendered to the arriving authorities – not Thorne's Guild enforcers, but the regular City Constabulary, their faces a mixture of shock and uncertainty. But as she was led away, the weight of her father's tarnished name felt… different. Not cleared, perhaps, but overwritten.
The fight wasn't over; it had just changed shape.
👏 I'm glad you managed to push out part 3. Lots of action, and my kind of read.
Lots of action and a great setup for an adventure by an underdog! Keep this story going.